Unit 3 Feedback

 Hello, 

 

I am going to be discussing and providing feedback on Older Adults- Psychosocial Female Mind- Elderly 

 

 

You did a great job discussing different aspects of psychological, social and emotional development. The image when you open the website sections fits well with the information you shared. For example, the women eating her ice- cream shows that regardless of your age women of all ages should enjoy their life. I also enjoyed that you provided a video on what is aging. The video clarifies how aging affects females and what it means to age. You used clear subheadings such as “social aspects and emotional aspects. This made it easier to read the paragraphs. I did notice that some images were missing references. I would add reference below of each image, so the reader can reference the images if needed. I did not notice any grammatical errors, however I noticed that some of the videos you shared were missing a caption describing the video. For example, the video on “Unveiling the Mental Health Challenges of older women” video is a great video, however having a caption would be important so the readers know what the video is about and how it relates to the content provided. The conclusion was cohesive and summarized the information well. You shared important details on how psychological, social and emotional development affects elderly women. I liked that you included evidence -based data such as older people show higher emotional reactivity compared to females from different age groups. 

 

 

Overall great job! Thanks for sharing.